Post by .:Rippledstream:. on Oct 12, 2008 18:53:29 GMT -5
nameDawningdusk
nicknameDawn
age30 moons
breed no cluee
colorHer pelt is a grey/blue with russet under tones as well as white points such as her chin, chest and toes.. She has vivid green eyes.
gendershe-cat
allianceThunderClan
*personalityShe is very energetic, but in a controlled manner, she's just, kind, loyal, brave, courageous and caring, but don't let this decieve you! She's very swift, cunning and a fierce battle oponent.
*historyDawningdusk was born to ThunderClan but her father was from RiverClan so she lived a divided life for a very long time. Seeing the pain it caused her, her father decided to pleed ThunderClan to accept him for he couldn't keep causing his daughter such pain. RiverClan was outraged and seeked out the tom and killed him and his mate, leaving Dawningdusk alive, for they didn't know she was the daughter of the so called traitor. For a long time, her life was full of guilt and pain, for it was, in her opinion, her fault that her parents where dead. But she soon turned her life around, wanting to prouve to everyone that a cat's past doesn't always shape his or her future. They have time to turn it around if they have the right mentality about them. She is a very loyal, hard working cat who deserves to belong to ThunderClan with not prejudices as does every pure-breed ThunderClan cat.
*sample postDawningdusk padded through the thick undergrowth that wreathed itself amongst the trees that littered the ThunderClan terrain. Her ears where perked, one forward and the other swivered back and to the side, following the sounds of an intruder. Her heart raced as her eyes scanned the deep bushes, trying to locate the offender that had breached the dawn patrol's security. She cautiously lifted her nose, opening her mouth slightly she scented and tasted the air, trying to get a better idea what she was up against. Her belly did a back flip as she recognized the smell. It was a sick cat! She creapt slowly forward, all her weight distributed on light, arched feet. She felt her shoulder fur, which had been bristled before, soften slightly now as the enemy movement stopped. Finaly, taking a decided step forward, she pushed through the thick foliage. Nothing could have braced her for what she saw now. Her eyes opened wide, her mouth forming a surprised "o". In front of her was a large tom, the fluffy cat had his shoulder hunched but she recognized, under all of the sickness, the scent. "I dont believe it" she whispered "I can't believe you're alive!" she gasped, rushing to the cat's side. "Flightwing" she whispered "Oh father! I thought you'd died" she breathed, her eyes welling up with tears.*
*picture
*recommended bySnowy cause she's going to be Flamestar's mate
*oooh! cliff hanger Twilight! haha turns out Tenderpool's brother is alive and is a father! haha what happens next ... we shall see
*
nicknameDawn
age30 moons
breed no cluee
colorHer pelt is a grey/blue with russet under tones as well as white points such as her chin, chest and toes.. She has vivid green eyes.
gendershe-cat
allianceThunderClan
*personalityShe is very energetic, but in a controlled manner, she's just, kind, loyal, brave, courageous and caring, but don't let this decieve you! She's very swift, cunning and a fierce battle oponent.
*historyDawningdusk was born to ThunderClan but her father was from RiverClan so she lived a divided life for a very long time. Seeing the pain it caused her, her father decided to pleed ThunderClan to accept him for he couldn't keep causing his daughter such pain. RiverClan was outraged and seeked out the tom and killed him and his mate, leaving Dawningdusk alive, for they didn't know she was the daughter of the so called traitor. For a long time, her life was full of guilt and pain, for it was, in her opinion, her fault that her parents where dead. But she soon turned her life around, wanting to prouve to everyone that a cat's past doesn't always shape his or her future. They have time to turn it around if they have the right mentality about them. She is a very loyal, hard working cat who deserves to belong to ThunderClan with not prejudices as does every pure-breed ThunderClan cat.
*sample postDawningdusk padded through the thick undergrowth that wreathed itself amongst the trees that littered the ThunderClan terrain. Her ears where perked, one forward and the other swivered back and to the side, following the sounds of an intruder. Her heart raced as her eyes scanned the deep bushes, trying to locate the offender that had breached the dawn patrol's security. She cautiously lifted her nose, opening her mouth slightly she scented and tasted the air, trying to get a better idea what she was up against. Her belly did a back flip as she recognized the smell. It was a sick cat! She creapt slowly forward, all her weight distributed on light, arched feet. She felt her shoulder fur, which had been bristled before, soften slightly now as the enemy movement stopped. Finaly, taking a decided step forward, she pushed through the thick foliage. Nothing could have braced her for what she saw now. Her eyes opened wide, her mouth forming a surprised "o". In front of her was a large tom, the fluffy cat had his shoulder hunched but she recognized, under all of the sickness, the scent. "I dont believe it" she whispered "I can't believe you're alive!" she gasped, rushing to the cat's side. "Flightwing" she whispered "Oh father! I thought you'd died" she breathed, her eyes welling up with tears.*
*picture
*recommended bySnowy cause she's going to be Flamestar's mate
*oooh! cliff hanger Twilight! haha turns out Tenderpool's brother is alive and is a father! haha what happens next ... we shall see
*
